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“Warning, weak and fragile!”
you labelled me,
because I broke.

“Replace when damaged!”
is your brand of trouble shooting.

You never read half the manual
before (ab)using the product,
otherwise you couldn't have missed this:


Important Safety Instructions

Note: Every human is breakable
without proper care and maintenance.

Caution: Too much pressure can cause mental injury.
Caution: Abrasive words might damage god's product.

Warning! Failure to talk things through can cause electric shock to the heart.
Warning! Persistent ignorance kills!

You didn't even read the signs written all over my face:
Caution, valuable, handle with care!
I wrote this about a week ago.

Comments are very appreciated :)
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RimmiRose138 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
And my mom says we don't come with instructions... :3 I should show her this: it's absolutely awesome!
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :squee:
And feel free to show it to your mom if you want to ;)
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Zevais Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist
This made me think of a TV sitcom that doesn't exist yet. A robot is trying to read a manual on how to take care of his human servant. I just started laughing as a result.
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can't help the feeling its mathematical logic would force the robot to read the whole manual though :giggle:
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cerealnovels Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
This is really good!
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :squee:
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Metal-Sculpture Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ich fass dich nur mit Samthandschuhen an ; D

wenn das nur alle so tun würden.....
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Samthandschuhe sind nicht unbedingt nötig, aber ein offenes Ohr hilft sehr viel. :hug:
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sacredZinja Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Caution, valuable, handle with care!"

I really like, that there's "valuable" in it. That's so true!

And I think I know the feeling. What comes to my mind is "inconceivable" and "beyond comprehension"...

(I am sorry that this is all bold. Shouldn't be.)
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for you comment :heart:
Yes, valuable was very important to me here as the opposite of weak (well not the 1:1 opposite, that would have been strong.).

(the 'boldness' probably happened when you copied this line from my poem into your comment ;))
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sacredZinja Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think of valuable as the opposite of abject, or something in this direction. It's the one word that says: You are never allowed to treat me like you did.

(Yes, I think so, but I didn't know how to make it go away. ^^)
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yes exactly that! I couldn't have said it better.
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sacredZinja Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's nice to be understood!
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hell yes, :hug:
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UnThai Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This really sounds like a sophisticated group, but I am currently struggling to participate properly in the groups I am already in. So thank you for your kind invitation, but if you don't mind, I'd like to get back to your offer later. :)
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UnThai Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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