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The curb is dry but you still parked your car half way up the pavement. The empty glasses of yesterday still linger in your head, can't decide which is up and which is down and the colours are too bright. But her face won't vanish from your brain. On the bridge, in the forest, near the lake: You see her everywhere. She vanished for a second as you emptied the last glass, but only until you regained consciousness. Then she returned, like someone had pulled back the veil that just temporarily hid her.
You drive past her house in the distance, but don't dare to get closer. You're afraid she won't be waiting for you when you get there. You can handle admiring her from the past, but not losing her entirely. You're like a stone statue that knows its place: She may touch you as she brushes past, but you never ever can touch her unless she awakens you with a kiss. But the stone cutter did ugly work on you, or so you think, thus she is not likely to touch you any time soon.
She is like the late afternoon sun, mirrored in the lake. So warm, so soft, even without touching. Or like the bird singing her song on the power line, light-hearted and unimpressed by the power. Like the woman leaning a little too far over the edge. No, not like, she is that woman.
That's when stone talked to stone and the bridge awakened you to save her. The bridge railing can only hold on to her for so long, make it a quick drive, stoneman.
You drive past her house in the distance, but don't dare to get closer. You're afraid she won't be waiting for you when you get there. You can handle admiring her from the past, but not losing her entirely. You're like a stone statue that knows its place: She may touch you as she brushes past, but you never ever can touch her unless she awakens you with a kiss. But the stone cutter did ugly work on you, or so you think, thus she is not likely to touch you any time soon.
She is like the late afternoon sun, mirrored in the lake. So warm, so soft, even without touching. Or like the bird singing her song on the power line, light-hearted and unimpressed by the power. Like the woman leaning a little too far over the edge. No, not like, she is that woman.
That's when stone talked to stone and the bridge awakened you to save her. The bridge railing can only hold on to her for so long, make it a quick drive, stoneman.
Literature
Youth
A thousand burning candles
lighting up a temple.
With the quenching of the last flickering flame
the aegis falls,
and the sacred building crumbles.
Literature
...
fine then, just leave me alone
let me rot in this "shithole" existence
you don't like it?
well it's none of your business
try to turn me around
put me on "the right path"?
it won't work
you haven't experienced such wrath
and then experienced the everlasting calm
but you'll never understand
all you know is the bad
all you remember is sad
i'm sorry you felt the need to cut me off
it's a real shame
and you weren't even involved
as if our friendship was a game
well i miss your friendship
you hurt me just as badly
as the one you criticize
still, i would renew our bond, gladly
if you weren't this way or that
stubborn, hard headed
just open you
Literature
mother
mother with whistle, button and mace
drops her weapons to the hospital floor
and screams.
father rejoices - a princess! i'll teach her
everything.
mother still screams.
father, laughing - i pity the boy who asks for her hand.
mother holds baby and shrieks.
father's skin crawls - why aren't you happy?
mother screams. mother howls. mother, inconsolable
(everyone dies but girls are always
born dead)
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This was inspired by 0hgravity's journal: move your feet from hot pavement into the grass.
The journal is a few days old, but I still find it very inspiring. Maybe it inspires you, too.
(Link me to your result in that case)
The journal is a few days old, but I still find it very inspiring. Maybe it inspires you, too.
(Link me to your result in that case)
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interesting piece. I like how you carried the simile of the protagonist as a stone statue into the final line and how even though his statue like nature seems off-putting to the woman, his weight is what she seems to need and her seeming buoyancy is what he needs.
few *years old, haha
few *years old, haha