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I am wild,
I am hot,
I am danger.

I Am The Fire!

I consume what is in my way
burn down the homes of my enemies
and dance on the ashen carcasses
of my victims.

I love with a scorching heat.
Don't get so close,
if you are not ready
to get your fingers burnt.

If you try to put me out
I will devour you.

If you nurture me
I will warm you
and roast your food
instead of you.

It's your decision:
friend or foe?
*All new and shiny: poca2hontas created a fractal for this poem: I Am The Fire (fractal):*
I Am The Fire (collab with Story-of-a-Mind) by poca2hontas


Shayele82 inspired me again this time with this picture with the title (who would have guessed) Fire #3:
The Fire # 3 by Shayele82

I just realized this reminds me strongly of Frozen Hive Mind
Seems I am into this "You are... I am...." pattern right now...

Fire  is not your element?
Try one of those then:
Earth
Water
Air (aka Wind)
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poca2hontas Featured By Owner Edited Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:wave: I chose this poem to create a piece of work for, hope it does it justice and you like it dear :)   
I Am The Fire (collab with Story-of-a-Mind) by poca2hontas
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I don't like it. I love it. :heart:
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poca2hontas Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dass ist super nett von Dir x
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nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is inspiring...I may have an idea for a poem that is not so sappy and unoriginal now. Danke!
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :)
I am very happy that my poem is inspriring to you. I am very curious to read that poem you might write, please link me to it when it is finished!

And thank you very much for the :star: as well :squee:
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nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're most welcome! I will keep you informed when I do! :salute:
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Dracyon Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I think, you meant "to geht your fingers burnt" and not "bunt" in line 12.
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
outch! Yes, of course. I corrected it now. Thanks for pointing it out.
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sacredZinja Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely line: "and roast your food instead of you."

Seems like the fire has some sense of humor... like it!
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :)
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