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Earth,
I crawled to your surface again.
I had been tangled up in
passageways carved through
the soil of my mind.

I grew new roots
to find nutrient matter
buried deeply below
shallow hearts and shallow minds,
buried deeply within
distorted fragments of broken selfs.

Earth,
I feel your support again.
You gave me back solid ground
below my searching, stumbling feet.

Embracing me with your weathered hands,
you give me what I lost and found:
A place, a whole planet, a home for my soul.
This is my entry for the monthly challenge by  #Dreamers-Welcome. This months theme is "Earth".

to the challenge description ->
to the other lovely entries ->

Earth is not your element?
Try one of those then:
Water
Fire
Air (aka Wind)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I saw this featured for a DLD a while ago and I was so happy, especially since it was for #Dreamers-Welcome's monthly challenge! So now, I'm really kicking myself for not giving this a fave 'cause I could've sworn I did! >_< Gah, I love(d) this piece. <3
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :)
I'd also like to thank you guys for your wonderful prompts, as I would never head written this without them. :tighthug:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. :)
Haha, it's all =SpriteBlayde. She comes up with the prompts about 95% of the time and they're always so brilliant. :love:
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SpriteBlayde Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, thank you for giving me credit. But I think you contribute more than 95%.... you've helped me with more than a couple of the ideas! :love:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks boss lady. 'Preciate that. :heart:
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SpriteBlayde Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey now, I'm not a boss lady! Just a bossy lady. ;P LOL And no need to thank me, just giving credit where credit is due. ^_^
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:lmao: That's funny. :XD:
<3
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Sabishi-Tenshii Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Das gefällt mir sehr gut!

Du kannst dich echt super gut ausdrücken :3


Weiter so!

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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dankeschön :heart:
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AbbyMeyer Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
A brilliant ode to the element of earth. :) I find the use of repetition in particular very effective.
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